THE GOOD CHILD - Authors Luisa, Natalie, Jayden and Alicia
Chapter 1:The kids just aren't getting it!!!
One sunny day there was a small boy that was named George. The boy didn’t know many things. He didn’t even know how to write a sentence though he was eleven years old, although a kindergarten kid or if they were very smart they might be a 3 year old kid.
He was very scared of school because he always got bullied from the people in his class. Today was Friday the last day of the week he was glad that he wouldn't get bullied too much during the day. But everyday is equal because he gets bullied so much. He can’t even keep track of how kids bully him and how many times they bully him each day. His mum said to me ” everything is going to be fine ok , “mum said“ you always say that and then it gets worse,” George added.
I love the story! But just make sure your chapter titles ( sub headings ) match the paragraph. But overall I think you are amazing writers.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great story well done children
ReplyDeleteIt is such a pleasure to have a person like you to spend your time and dedication reading my book . I really appreciate your comment it has encouraged me to write new books.
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Wonderful story kids
ReplyDeleteI loved reading all the stories. You should be very proud of your story!
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