Thursday 30 October 2014

WHO ARE THEY? - Author Monique


Every Year on the 7th day of the 7th month a group of ladies wearing, bright pink suits and light pink high heels would parade across the town. No one knew who they were or what they were doing. In the little town of Marshwall, America, there was only a majority of people who lived there, 59 people to be exact. They were all boring people. They had boring jobs, boring houses, and boring hobbies. They did everything that they possibly could in a boring way. But there was one girl who lived in Marshwall that did the total opposite of ordinary Marshwallians. 

Her name was ‘Evelyn Smith’. She had long blond hair and large blue eyes. Her long eyelashes flushed with excitement. But there was only one thing that made her different, this thing was very clear to everyone. The reason she was so different was because she hated boring and she hated doing boring things. She wanted to explore and investigate, but there was nothing worth exploring in Marshwall. There was never anything to do here.

One bright and early morning Evelyn was helping her mother prune the bushes and weed the grass when she noticed the lovely ladies and decided that this was worth investigating. She wondered who they were and what they were doing here in Marshwall. Evelyn eyed them with suspicion and grabbed her mother’s sleeve. “Yes dear? What’s wrong?” replied Evelyn’s mother. “Mumma, who are those ladies?” She pointed towards the fourteen ladies crowding around the town square.

“Well dear, no one really knows who they are. They just come and go every year. They mind their own business and we mind “I just want to know if their business is worth exploring”

Her mother stared at her shocked to hear such a thing. “Evelyn that isn’t a very nice thing to do” She knew it was wrong but she was so curious she couldn’t bear leaving it alone. She figured that if she left bright and early in the morning she could go and explore the ladies and be back before her mother knew she was gone.

Evelyn then realised she needed an excuse if her mother did find out she was gone. Carefully picking up the phone and making sure no one was listening she dialled her grandma’s number. BRING! BRING! “Hello Granny! It’s Evelyn I just want ask you if you could tell mamma I was with you.” “Why Evelyn? What are you going to do? I hope it isn’t dangerous” “No grandmama, I’m just exploring” Evelyn slightly lied. “Hmm, I suppose so, but if only you come back in one piece. I don’t think it’s safe to do so but just this once” “Thanks Granny!” Evelyn quickly hung up and smiled happily to herself. Evelyn’s grandmother always understood. When she was young she used to go exploring as well. I guess Evelyn inherited those genes from her grandmother.

The next morning, Evelyn readied herself and quickly sprung at the door at an alarming time, 3am. She crept out quietly and headed towards the Town Square. She was sure they would be spotted here first because usually the Pink ladies are seen here early in the morning. She hid behind a large, silver statue and awaited the ladies. It was too early in the morning and there was no sight of them. Evelyn yawned and stood up ready to leave. RUSTLE! RUSTLE! Evelyn quickly ducked behind the statue and watched the ladies shuffle by. Evelyn stood up and slowly crept up behind them, following eagerly making sure to stay out of sight.

She crept as silent as a cheetah ready to pounce on lunch. They came to a clearing covered aggressively by large pine trees, the ladies stopped and gave a slight peek behind their backs. One lady with a yellow sash pulled out a kind-of stick. It was white and covered with specks of gold dust. The other ladies did the same revealing their own personalised stick, they all muttered something but they were too far away for Evelyn to hear. Then all of a sudden a misty fog magically appeared and a secret door revealed itself. Evelyn stood there awestruck, ‘How did they do that?’ she thought.

They all marched inside followed close by Evelyn. A nervous expression fell upon Evelyn’s face. “What if they were witches? Nah they couldn’t be, but then how did they do that? I have a feeling they are witches, but are they good or bad?” Evelyn bit her bottom lip nervously.

Evelyn could hear rumbling and rattling above her. She was walking under some sort of tunnel. The tunnel was perfectly carved out of sandstone and was lit brightly with gas lanterns. The rumbling and rattling continued above her. Evelyn was curious as to where they were. As they continued down the tunnel a large sign stuck out from the wall. It was quite dark even though the there were gas lanterns but she could barely read the sign. She edged closer and could make out the words Marshwall and station. Then it struck her, she was under the Marshwall train station. It was a long trip of walking but after a while the tunnel started to get brighter and warmer.

Evelyn continued to follow them. They twisted through this tunnel and so did Evelyn, they twisted through that tunnel and so did Evelyn. They came to a small stone room but it was empty, it was a dead end. She stopped at the entrance before they could see her. She hear some murmuring and whispering, SWOOSH! ‘What was that?’ she thought. She peeked inside to find an astonishing sight.

The witches had disappeared. This explained her theory. They had to be witches. Something was suspicious about those ladies and Evelyn was going to find out. She eyed the room one last time and noticed in the whole entire room there was only one rock, it may have seemed ordinary but to Evelyn that seemed worth investigating. She picked up the small rock and shifted it around her hands. It felt light and hollow, Evelyn could feel a tiny slot. Moving her finger across it, she slid opened a panel and could touch a small button. She pressed down hard and the wall slid the the side.



Acclaimed Author Debra Oswald discussing her writing journey


Monday 27 October 2014

IMAGINE WAKING UP AND NOT REMEMBERING ... THIS IS WHAT MATTERS TO ME - Author Emily


He sits there motionless……intrigued by the wall. I greet him with a warm smile, sit down and make myself comfortable. I have always been curious about what goes on inside that jumbled up mind of his. It's cruel isn't it? He was always a passionate man, a man who would never give up. He often overworked himself, untiring to provide for his family. He would take pride in his work and family. Now he's just a frail man who just sit's in his chair and absentmindedly watches life play out before him. No control no power. I feel helpless, there is absolutely nothing that I can do to change him back to the man he once was or to help ease the difficulty those closest to him endure.

He will start conversing with us, but they will be things he will say that I don't understand. He often speaks in his native tongue, it sounds like gibberish to me……I don’t understand him. We all sadden at the fact that this disease can actually be so unsympathetic to people, people that are innocent and underserving.

The bus pulls up, it takes him away. Respite. Relief. For everybody. But only just for the day.....

Time has been reversed – it’s like he is an infant. I feel more responsible and mature than him. I am only 11 and he is 66.

When he goes to this caring facility he isn't treated like an adult - he is treated like the infant he once was. Sadly and unfairly, his brain is 6 years old but he has the body of an elderly man. Does he still feel excitement by colouring in or playing a board game or does he feel foolish playing in this childish world.

I ponder the fact, does he enjoy going there or does he dislike it? Does he even remember it at all? It's almost as if he is a child again, he can't care for himself. He cannot even shower himself.

The problem is, there is not enough awareness going on to tell people about mental illnesses. Maybe even if you detect it early you'll be in with a bit of luck. I wonder if there is any sort of cure or breakthrough, because nothing prepares you for the anguish the loved ones and the patient must go through.

The millions of people that are diagnosed with the illness every year are not aware of how cruel it really is. Without a medical breakthrough for dementia, these people will be helpless and suffer.

I wonder who he is anymore and I fear the day he won't even remember who I am. Sadly this is the story of my grandfather, he is only 66 years old and suffers with dementia. This is what matters to me......

Sunday 26 October 2014

Acclaimed Author: Debra Oswald discussing how punctuation the code for reading

One of the most important writing tips Debra Oswald gave the student writers was the importance of punctuation and if you want to be a good writer you need to be good at punctuation.


Monday 20 October 2014

Imagine - Authors Bridget and Tamia


The girls created and sent in this mosaic for their story

Imagine a world without marginalism. The reason why the price of diamonds is higher than that of water, for example, owes to the greater additional satisfaction of the diamonds over the water.

I auscultate the impertinent words that have haunted my past, and will contribute to my future. Lying as frail as a lily, neglected and despondent, my wise words can only carry my burden of worthlessness.

The dandelion absconds my wishes and dreams and transforms my most crepuscular nightmares into my reality.

The harrowing thought of not fitting in pursues me like an agonizing dark soul shadowing the potential of being accepted. Righteous and just is not shown throughout our world. The act of marginalism empowers the few acts of humbleness. How much are you willing to sacrifice for equality?

Marginalism gives an effect to important aspects of change. The majority of society can be charged as guilty for talking the talk but not walking the walk. When I pinch myself, I only can see the devastating blood shed reality. Our reality does not exist, it is something we create.

~We are each burdened with marginalism; against the poor or the rich, the smart or the slow, the gaunt or the obese. It is natural to develop marginalism. It is noble to rise above it. ~Author Unknown.~

Marginalism contributes to mental, physical, spiritual and social health. It castes apartheids and suicides. Help those who cannot help themselves; be the change you wish to see in this world.

A minor amount of courageous and heroic citizens, dared to take a stand in the apartheid. Are you willing to take a stand for your neighbours that may be a victim of this number one killer in disguise? This is what matters, marginalism. Can you imagine a world without marginalism?


"Marginalism is a burden that confuses the past, threatens the future and renders the present inaccessible "~Maya Angeloue 


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VC Part 1 with acclaimed author Debra Oswald

Yesterday we had the pleasure of Debra Oswald's time and keen young writers from Good Samaritan, Bethlehem, St Patricks and St Ursula's discussing what makes a good writing piece and what to do when you are faced with a writing challenge.

I will post a part of the video conference each day. Hope you enjoy this wonderful opportunity!



Sunday 19 October 2014

THE ART OF LOSING YOUR IMAGINATION - Author Danielle


Young me once had a relishing imagination, with many aspirations, 
See, I wanted to be a firefighter but it’s too late for fixation. 
Now I'm only able to extinguish the good within my mind and heart 
Because all this world has done for me is tear, trash and thwart. 
In fact, this mundaneness is a cycle, that’s only getting stronger; 
My sister just told me she can’t imagine no longer. 
Still, what can I do? But I guess I can't sit here and ponder, 
And we're silently struggling simultaneously with it everyday 
With nobody, not even the euphoric finding an exit way. 

I’m trying not to fade away, but I don’t know if I can last
My mind is turning into an untimely time glass. 
As the last grains drip and then there is no more sand; 
Tales like Cinderella begin to desolate and become slightly bland. 
And when I count one sheep, two sheep; I feel immature 
What can I do? I’m not sure my mind can endure. 
Who knew an imagination was that important to hold on to 
Too late I guess, I departed from that plane long ago

So I tell you small seedlings do not grow rapid like a vine; 
To quick, too soon, a departure from all those happy times. 
Instead imagine, think ; make your world something that you create, 
But most importantly do not let your imagination dissipate. 
Believe in monsters, fairies, ghosts and any mythological creature, 
Unless you want to follow the boring, never ending life procedure. 
And finally what can I do? Well I'll start believing, that is for sure, 
I'll run wild, let no one stop me, it’s my life; that I'll ensure 
That’s how you overcome the art of losing your imagination.



Saturday 18 October 2014

VC with acclaimed writer Debra Oswald


Very exciting! Looking forward to meeting the seven Secondary finalists on the video conference tomorrow and having Debra Oswald give feedforward advice and talk about her writing journey.